A very high standard of analysis here which if you continue at the same level for the second text will earn you a grade B. There is little to comment on in terms of corrections. Other than an addition of "Influence" where you explain what elements of the video you could use to influence the construction of yours. Please complete the second TA before next week 17/10/2017.
A very high standard of analysis here which if you continue at the same level for the second text will earn you a grade B. There is little to comment on in terms of corrections. Other than an addition of "Influence" where you explain what elements of the video you could use to influence the construction of yours. Please complete the second TA before next week 17/10/2017.
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